Monday, April 26, 2010

MmmmmMonday - I Favor Fire

Hello there my dear, sweet Fanfic Lemon Lovers o' mine!!!!!

Today's MmmmmmMonday treat is I Favor Fire from our very own OnePushyFox! It's a fun little twisty fic which is set in the tent scene in Eclipse. This o/s was written as dare of sorts by me (yes, I'm the 'friend' in the a/n) who mentioned in a chat once that I didn't think people would like a J/B lemon. Mainly because it would piss off all the hard core B/E shippers out there....

And.....

She proved me sooo wrong, cuz people (myself included) LOVED IT!!!!!

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I glided my hands back down to her waist and ran them up under her shirt, groaning into her mouth as I felt the soft undersides of her breasts. She moaned back as I ran my hands up, cupping them, her head falling back as my thumbs grazed her nipples. Impatiently, she reached between us and tore her shirt up over her head. I lowered my mouth to her breasts, sucking the pebble hard flesh into my mouth.

She cried out as I licked it hard, whimpering as my tongue continued to brush her nipple then flick it harshly. When I took it between my teeth gently, she screamed my name and wrapped her legs around my waist, pressing tightly against me. I rocked back into her, reveling in the heat I could feel welling between her legs, reveling in the fact that it was my name she was calling out in the throes of passion.

I continued to descend down her torso, licking her ribs, nibbling my way down to her belly button and beyond. When she realized where I was headed, she began pulling at my hair, as if to stop me, but, honestly, after having a taste of her mouth, there was no way I was going to pass up my chance to taste her very essence. Not unless she specifically said, "No." And while her hands in my hair were saying, "No," her hips were bucking up against me in a pretty convincing, "Yes!"

I worked the button on her jeans with a simple flick of my thumb and swept the denim down over her hips as if it were mere silk. It took all my restraint not to just rip her jeans off her. I could smell her, even through her sweet, white, cotton panties by this point and I was near insane with lust. She smelled incredible…tart like apples, sweet like cream. With a smell like that, there was no way I wasn't going to taste her.

I pushed her jeans all the way off, reaching up to pull her panties off with them. Her hands left my hair to cover herself, but I just batted her hands away, hitching her leg up over my shoulder so that my face was almost buried between her legs. I took one last breath of her intoxicating scent in before I let my tongue tentatively explore her.



One of my fav things about this story is it's the first one she was brave enough to publish. And I'm so damn happy she did! If she didn't, you wouldn't be reading In the Blood, Dazzling, Monster, Pretty Little Lies or Show Some Class....

Hey - speaking of Show Some Class...



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2 comments:

One Pushy Fox said...

You are such a doll for pimping me out!!! And thank you so much for encouraging me to publish in the first place. *hugs hard* You know I love you big time for that. :)

Betti Gefecht said...

sorry it took me until wwwwwednesday to check on mmmmmonday,but awwwww.... one od my fffffffavorite oneshots recc'd here. I still think Pushy should also publish the one she wrote for me for xmas... just saying.