Where was I? Oh yes, Halloween. Right. Well, before you pack up your costumes and move on to thinking about the rest of the upcoming holidays, let's take one last moment to savor the lemony flavor of the only holiday that encourages adults to dress up and wear masks. And what better way to do that then to read a nice, lemony one-shot about what happens when Bella and Edward meet at a costume party: The Halloween Party by HannahMae288.
Edward (we assume) is throwing a costume party on Halloween. He's dressed as Batman although we get a glimpse of his gorgeous green eyes through his mask.
Bella is at the party with Alice (of course) who has dressed Bella up as a naughty French Maid (naturally). Toss two star-crossed lovers gently, apply a liberal dose of liquor and the lemons are ready to roll:He walked over to where I sat on the bed.
He started gently kissing and sucking on my neck.
His hands slid behind my back and started to undo the clasps of the corset.
The slow torture of foreplay was killing me.
“mooore, I need more.” I finally was able to force out.
“Hmm, the little French maid isn’t as innocent as she seems..” he said smirking as my top fell to the floor.
“Fucking perfect.” he breathed out as I felt my face get hot.
He cautiously began kissing my breasts. He took my hardened peak into his mouth.
I gasped and moaned.
He bit down gently and then twirled his tongue around my nipple. Then made his way to the other one, while massaging the one he had just finished with.

His hands went up underneath the short ruffle skirt and in one quick movement my panties were gone.
I gasped and tried to see him, but it was pitch black and I couldn’t see anything.
He sat up to do something, I heard Velcro, so I kind of assumed he was taking his mask off.
Then he went back down and started kissing my inner thighs. I moaned loudly and I could feel him smiling.
His tongue darted out and licked my wet sex.
I screamed out in pure pleasure.
He licked and nibbled as I felt my stomach knotting up in an unfamiliar feeling.
He took my clit into his mouth and licked it fiercely.
“Ahhhh ohh ahhh goddd.”
I reached down and felt his hair for the first time. It was soft and there was just enough for me to get a good grasp. He moaned as soon as I had a hold on his hair, which send vibrations through his mouth, it sent me over the edge.
While still riding out my release he kissed his way back up my body and started kissing my mouth again.
This story's a short one, less than 2,500 words, and while we move through the action quickly, I liked it and I think the author shows promise. My absolute favorite part was the very last line, after Bella wakes up alone:

I just had sex with Batman.
So if you liked it to, feel free to vote for it. The contest is The Two Sides of Twilight. Click on the link and you'll be taken to the voting poll page. I know HannahMae288 would appreciate your vote.
Happy MmmmmMonday!











3 comments:
sex with batman and Edward in one person - that's quite something... yum yum
I know, right? I loved the concept on this one, it was fun. I only wish she had made it longer.
Can't wait to read!!! Love ya sis~!
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