Monday, January 18, 2010

MmmmmMonday - The Trip Home

There once was a time when the Lemon Sisters did not exist.....


See kids, this was a very lonely time for a closet Twi-lover who wasn't even known as Uhyesplease yet. However, by a one in a million chance blogpost through a super secret lovely name Cutie, she met The One. And by The One, I mean, the sister she never knew she needed. The person who completed her. Not only did this foxy lady give her the gumption to write, but she also made her laugh, shared fic recs and most of all chatted all hours of the day and night. About Twilight. About kids. About hubbies. But most of all about lemons.


How much do I love this girl - I can't even tell you!


One night in particular stands out while chatting about this and that. These two had reached a bit of a lull of sorts - all due to a fic update that had arrived in Uhyesplease's email inbox. She wanted to chat with Foxy but this was one of those fics that she had to drop everything for. And I mean EVERYTHING.

It was Chapter 30 of The Trip Home by mskathy.

See, UYP is a bit of a sucker for the romance. And a little bit more for the naughty stuff. She really has no problem with alternate or mixed pairings. Not only did this fic satisfy her need for great storytelling, but she was completely in love with Bella, Jasper and Edward who in turn were also all crazy in love with each other.

And then there were the lemons.

Oh, sweet citrus of the gods...

The lemons....

Not only was she not able to converse properly with her lovely Pushy - but she absolutely HAD to share the delectable smut she was reading. Sharing really IS caring after all.




“Can you touch your toes?”

“I think so?” she squeaked, voice thick with uncertain expectation.

Biting her lower lip, I couldn't help the predatory grin that spread across my face. I gave her one last quick kiss before grabbing her waist and turning us around. We were facing Edward, me behind Bella, and I slid my hands up the front of her body. She rocked back against me, head resting on my shoulder as I teased her breasts, pinching and pulling her nipples. My teeth left soft marks on her skin, and when I could see Edward had enough teasing, I took a half step back, then ran one hand to Bella's neck.

Curling my hand around to the back of her neck, I pressed gently, but with enough force that she'd get the point. She rolled her body down seductively. I could see her elbows sticking out, and I imagined that she was teasing Edward just as I had been, the soft pads of her fingertips ghosting over her skin as she essentially bent herself in half.

I took a minute to trace the soft curves and shapes of her body, appreciating the subtle but lovely differences between her and Edward. They each called to me, in entirely different ways. I delighted in the fact that I was lucky enough to have them both to love, and to love me. From where I was standing, I saw Bella's slim fingers wind around her ankles and my own cupped the swell of her ass. My hands turned, fingertips pointing in toward her center, and I couldn't resist the urge to tease her briefly, skimming them along her slit. I watched as she shivered.

Smirking at her response, I brought one hand to my own body, giving myself a quick stroke as I looked at Edward. His body was tense, but his pace was still slow and measured. I wanted to drive him insane. I wanted to hold that power over him, cause his own orgasm to burst from his body, without even touching him.

As I guided my cock into Bella, my other hand went to her hip to help steady her. I heard her suck in a short, gasping breath at my welcomed invasion of her body. She pressed back against me and I slowly sank all the way into her. I had no idea what it felt like for her from this position, but the tightness of her muscles already quivering around me forced my eyes closed. Once I was buried inside and had fought the urge to thrust for long enough, I brought my other hand to her hip and began to move.

My eyes opened slightly, and I looked down between our bodies. The leisurely pace we were moving at was perfect for observing. I watched the way her skin slipped around me – with each stroke out, her lips seemed to hold onto me as long as they could. It was sensual and sexy at the same time, making me harder and fueling my desire to push faster.

Edward moaned and I looked up just in time to see his eyes squeeze shut. His hand fisted around his cock harder, stroking the entire length up and down. I licked my lips, knowing his orgasm would come soon. I continued to stroke in and out of Bella, provoking soft sighs and melodic sounds from her. Watching as he raised his hips off the seat, his body responding to the images he had seen before closing his eyes, and the sounds around him, I said his name quietly to get his attention.

His eyes opened and my smile lifted halfway. I raised an eyebrow and shifted my eyes down, hoping he'd pick up what I meant. He softly whispered a clipped “fuck” before his hand went back to work, flying over his body faster than before. Watching him stroke himself, watching my own cock sink in and come back out of Bella, it was almost too much.

Then the thing I had silently asked for, silently begged for, but never expected to actually happen, happened. I heard Edward mutter, then saw the droplets land on the swell of Bella's ass and I hardened further. My own head shook side to side as I watched his come land on her body, slipping over her skin, some of it sliding right down to where we were joined. I'd never done anything even remotely close to that before. As I watched Edward's come disappear inside Bella with my cock, I didn't just fall over the edge into my climax, I was shoved from the cliff at full speed.

My hands tightened their grip around her and I somehow managed to slow my movements, instead of stopping altogether, as I came. I was still mesmerized by the sight of Edward all over her. One of my hands moved to her back, swiping through the sticky liquid. We had both come inside of Bella before, but there was something feral about seeing it. Mid-stroke, I pulled out and finished in the same spot Edward had, watching in fascination as it happened.

Realizing Bella had not yet climaxed, I moved my fingers down to her opening. My thumb rested on her clit as I worked her back to a peak. My eyes focused on Edward's hands, now touching and rubbing her breasts and back. He shifted to sit on the ground next to her, their heads fairly even and their lips meeting with love.

Rubbing my fingers along her g-spot, I felt her tense and come around me. A soft, whimpering cry tumbled from her mouth against Edward's. I slowed my fingers, withdrawing them gently from her body when I was certain her pleasure had been drained. My arms wrapped around her and I pulled her down to the floor of the shower with me. The three of us wrapped around each other, as we were meant to be.



Then the IM conversation went something like this:

OPF: HOLY SHIT - Did you write that???
UYP: Are you fucking kidding me? I could NEVER write something as awesome as that - that's ALL mskathy from the latest chapter of The Trip Home.
OPF: Really? THAT WAS FUCKING HOT!
UYP: I KNOW! I've been telling you to read this fic for weeks now!
OPF: Is it all like that?
UYP: Yes, and it's not just about the lemons, it goes so far beyond the lemons. It's awesome, it's my favorite AND my best.

I believe it was a day or two later that the Lemon Sisters were born because we just had to share the recs that we were passing back and forth to each other!

And now you (insert Jon Lovitz's voice from The Wedding Singer) get to reap all the benefits.

As always - I love you all!



6 comments:

One Pushy Fox said...

I love you!!! That tease you sent me was SO WICKED HOT! mskathy is an excellent writer and just an all around wonderful woman. Great pick, babe!!!!

Angela Lynn said...

I heart the Lemon Sisters like a lot. *hugs* This is all. =)

MsKathy said...

Thank you ladies SO MUCH for this. You've made my week, seriously, and how HOT is that picture?! I don't think I've seen the first one you posted.. so hot, and so wonderfully touching. Thank you for saying it was MORE than the lemons. That was my fave part <3 <3

uhyesplease said...

Pushy - the timing seemed so right to talk about our little chat so many months ago and finally rec my fav fic of all time! Woot! I love you too!

Cutie - and to think you started it all - it was so fun to find that old post and read about us sooo long ago! Love you!

And mskathy - you are awesome. You are one the bright shining stars of this fandom and I'm so happy to read everything you write, and love our own little conversations. And yes, as wonderful as the lemons are, the heart of this story is always what gets me and makes it so special. <3 you too!

Anntastic23 said...

I'm so glad to see how you guys started! Its amazing how Twi had brought so many ladies together, encouraged people to do things they may never have done - whether on a blank GoogleDoc page, or in the bedroom.

And holy crap I had to fan myself after reading that excerpt. It's been a long time since I read that. I found myself wanting to raid the fridge for some naughty toppings as well... But you are right about one thing, it's SUCH a great story, all lemons aside. Then again, how could you NOT have lemons when there's two fantastic guys & one gorgeous girl.

xoxo ladies!

Betti Gefecht said...

*fans self* ok...ok!
I know I'm supposed to write my fucking ch15, but... but.... how can I???
*hurries to read*